tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post3675840781258849..comments2023-09-03T04:14:13.410-07:00Comments on Freckled Writer: UprootedErin Davishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-13959830305317907412010-02-06T19:39:42.531-08:002010-02-06T19:39:42.531-08:00Wow. You always amaze me Erin. Always
xoxoWow. You always amaze me Erin. Always<br />xoxoAnnie Coehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01980814479525038344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-31629325732886604192010-02-02T08:34:33.486-08:002010-02-02T08:34:33.486-08:00Hi Erin,
I certainly like this! We can all find o...Hi Erin,<br /><br />I certainly like this! We can all find ourselves somewhere we never anticipated; everything just out of reach, dissolving before our eyes.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-14609380515817281542010-02-01T19:07:26.246-08:002010-02-01T19:07:26.246-08:00A softly strong look at the reality that frazzles ...A softly strong look at the reality that frazzles one's expectations. I enjoyed this!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-35873480269064128762010-02-01T06:24:10.453-08:002010-02-01T06:24:10.453-08:00My favorite poems are ones I want to read again an...My favorite poems are ones I want to read again and again. The words, images and rhythm in this poem are beautiful - read it five times so far. And the ending has a little suspense, a little question.Coppertophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00090138105387539054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-87068037753077438242010-01-31T11:23:16.337-08:002010-01-31T11:23:16.337-08:00"And dig in the dirt"
"And hope for..."And dig in the dirt"<br />"And hope for the rain"<br />Absolutely brilliant!<br />I really enjoyed what you wrote.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-41092184599472009042010-01-31T10:59:37.562-08:002010-01-31T10:59:37.562-08:00b-That's an excellent idea. I am going to try...b-That's an excellent idea. I am going to try Carolee's suggestion! Glad you liked the "anthologies."<br /><br />Lydia-You have made my day with your comment. So glad you liked this...I worked on it for what seemed like an eternity!Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-61784770609011828712010-01-31T04:43:59.193-08:002010-01-31T04:43:59.193-08:00having a little trouble getting this to take for s...having a little trouble getting this to take for some reason...<br />I like this, Erin, especially the anthologies in your sleep. (how many poems have I written that way *poof*)<br />[have you tried re-write as a cure for the block? carolee's pov suggestion from this past monday makeover worked a charm for me]Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490035808297516510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-18613241486623516232010-01-30T23:33:31.153-08:002010-01-30T23:33:31.153-08:00How to write the letters that form the sound of qu...How to write the letters that form the sound of quickly drawing in a breath? Don't know. But that is what I did when I came to the last word of your brilliant poem, Erin. O, wow, this is gorgeous and really suits the painting for me. <br /><em> a throne made of sand, ...a home made of air</em> and<br /><em>So I finger the beads<br />Of my sorrowful brain</em> <br />:)!!!!!!!Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.com