tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post3712124278799990665..comments2023-09-03T04:14:13.410-07:00Comments on Freckled Writer: TimeErin Davishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-37636570445408810482009-05-25T13:43:47.205-07:002009-05-25T13:43:47.205-07:00Very much family
Very much a parent
I know now
Th...Very much family<br />Very much a parent<br /><br />I know now<br />That windows open<br />And shut<br /><br />All the time<br /><br />Strange<br />That it took so long<br />For me<br />To realize<br />That I needed to be looking<br />To see itCitizen of Earthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03725229459557808120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-76755516568432574142009-05-25T10:41:04.097-07:002009-05-25T10:41:04.097-07:00This is wonderful, how you've captured her voice. ...This is wonderful, how you've captured her voice. I feel like I'm sitting right there in the living room with you.<br /><br />And I love how you ended it, with the image of the window shutting. That's exactly how it is--they give you a quick little glimpse then they turn it right off, don't they? Maybe it really is a generational thing. <br /><br />Thanks for all your visits to my blog, Erin.<br />When school's out, I'll have more time to return the favor. I have so much wonderful writing to read!!! ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-32077294256691561912009-05-25T00:40:10.313-07:002009-05-25T00:40:10.313-07:00I've been thinking a lot lately about this issue o...I've been thinking a lot lately about this issue of generational changes, including the willingness to honor one's feelings. So heart-wrenching. I feel I owe a debt of gratitude to these women and a nudge to encourage them to engage in "extreme selfcare" just to they'll don something nice for themselves. Then again, it isn't really my place to butt in. But I can be grateful--and know I'd have never made it!Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18372015226222285350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-68133335585899700742009-05-24T16:27:06.924-07:002009-05-24T16:27:06.924-07:00That's spot on. I can hear the voice and see the m...That's spot on. I can hear the voice and see the mother. It must be restful to see the daughters with a different life.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15238905633085051322noreply@blogger.com