tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post3939350640222145763..comments2023-09-03T04:14:13.410-07:00Comments on Freckled Writer: IlluminationErin Davishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-41239077102818127992010-01-04T10:28:21.930-08:002010-01-04T10:28:21.930-08:00Interesting! I like the manner with which you pers...Interesting! I like the manner with which you personalized the image. Lovely!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-71274229561903297572010-01-02T11:18:25.942-08:002010-01-02T11:18:25.942-08:00I love the way your next-to-last line brings the p...I love the way your next-to-last line brings the prompt image into the individual consciousness, Erin. No external geography but an internal one. Nice contrast of the scribbles one makes (perhaps desperately) and the enlightenment that breaks in.<br /><br />I love the epigrammatic quality of this. The feel coming off of this little gem was rather like Fitzgerald's interpretation of Khayyam's <i>Rubaiyat</i>.<br /><br /><i>Awake! for Morning in the Bowl of Night<br />Has flung the Stone that put the Stars to Flight:<br />And Lo! the Hunter of the East has caught<br />The Sultan's Turret in a Noose of Light.</i>Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-86588920733582662542010-01-02T04:00:32.292-08:002010-01-02T04:00:32.292-08:00'wall of my consciousness' was a delightfu...'wall of my consciousness' was a delightful twist. Happy New Year Erin.Irenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12918979903066830662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-19514788154506738282010-01-01T20:05:48.388-08:002010-01-01T20:05:48.388-08:00"Consciousness to light." Beautiful word..."Consciousness to light." Beautiful words and wonderful poemJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-39053098178488421762010-01-01T19:48:21.153-08:002010-01-01T19:48:21.153-08:00Oh, my. That is perfect! Thank you, Erin, and Happ...Oh, my. That is perfect! Thank you, Erin, and Happy New Year!dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-75787639753769707022010-01-01T18:11:13.884-08:002010-01-01T18:11:13.884-08:00Thank you, Karen. I do enjoy seeing how everyone ...Thank you, Karen. I do enjoy seeing how everyone interprets the image. It helps me see something new each time!Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-17665855786419281492010-01-01T18:06:12.441-08:002010-01-01T18:06:12.441-08:00Lovely. I also love that photo.
Happy New year, de...Lovely. I also love that photo.<br />Happy New year, dear poet. xoxoAnnie Coehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01980814479525038344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-92219128841523328702010-01-01T17:54:15.493-08:002010-01-01T17:54:15.493-08:00Sometimes it takes the light breaking in to illumi...Sometimes it takes the light breaking in to illuminate what we knew all along! Don't you love seeing how everyone interprets this differently? I like that you're seeing the "beauty/of the scribbles"!Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-33228573886008387082010-01-01T17:47:22.698-08:002010-01-01T17:47:22.698-08:00Thank you, Linda!Thank you, Linda!Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-60668996700140547312010-01-01T17:19:41.706-08:002010-01-01T17:19:41.706-08:00I am so glad the scribbles looked beautiful. It ma...I am so glad the scribbles looked beautiful. It makes the poem happy<br />and light. Thank you for sharing and all the best for the coming year!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.com