tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post5785287129228926379..comments2023-09-03T04:14:13.410-07:00Comments on Freckled Writer: SpooningErin Davishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-52818378611804431722009-08-22T15:54:31.140-07:002009-08-22T15:54:31.140-07:00This was terrific! I loved how you gave the inani...This was terrific! I loved how you gave the inanimate objects human qualities. (Or turned humans into inanimate objects!) That is the best thing..keep us guessing!Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-30365533285183399132009-08-22T14:57:28.001-07:002009-08-22T14:57:28.001-07:00Saucy!Saucy!Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18372015226222285350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-62754694034028856762009-08-22T07:03:40.590-07:002009-08-22T07:03:40.590-07:00Hello Erin,
I suddenly feel as if I've walked...Hello Erin,<br /><br />I suddenly feel as if I've walked in on a private moment!! Inspirational!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-47935397900707301812009-08-21T21:25:45.987-07:002009-08-21T21:25:45.987-07:00Not weird; witty and insightful. Happy Anniversary...Not weird; witty and insightful. Happy Anniversary!dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-24348910266069154052009-08-21T20:11:53.705-07:002009-08-21T20:11:53.705-07:00Very clever and smart :-). Brilliant!Very clever and smart :-). Brilliant!Annie Coehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01980814479525038344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-50097237769115653312009-08-21T16:46:58.423-07:002009-08-21T16:46:58.423-07:00Beautiful! The rhyme at the end really makes it.Beautiful! The rhyme at the end really makes it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-13946129210864992952009-08-21T16:11:16.257-07:002009-08-21T16:11:16.257-07:00piercing, teasing tines, indeed.
I love this. Al...piercing, teasing tines, indeed.<br /><br />I love this. Always had my own mythologies about the sexes (and sex) of things.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490035808297516510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-26144993730881155052009-08-21T14:18:31.259-07:002009-08-21T14:18:31.259-07:00Well, Erin, you have done it again! Marvelous. :)Well, Erin, you have done it again! Marvelous. :)Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-5949693651123830942009-08-21T14:07:53.970-07:002009-08-21T14:07:53.970-07:00very nice Erin...an your NEVER late.....just read ...very nice Erin...an your NEVER late.....just read it to my 10 yr old grandaughter who is visiting for weekend....she liked it also. AND she said they had to write a haiku poem for school last winter...and hers was late also....then she added but mione was the best....soooooooooWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-79548483404677247472009-08-21T12:45:17.666-07:002009-08-21T12:45:17.666-07:00From Therese B. at RWP -- What a great present for...From Therese B. at RWP -- What a great present for an anniversary! I wonder if any other RWP poem has ever been given away as a gift? That would make a great prompt: write a poem that will be given away as a gift.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-22924497456768738952009-08-21T12:16:10.754-07:002009-08-21T12:16:10.754-07:00Erin, this is just fabulous.
"Designed to be...Erin, this is just fabulous.<br /><br />"Designed to be filled up and emptied<br />out and to scoop her<br />days away"<br /><br />My favorite part. Just wonderful. I really like this a lot.Markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-68114737057654776702009-08-21T11:47:15.132-07:002009-08-21T11:47:15.132-07:00This is awesome (and very telling!!!)This is awesome (and very telling!!!)Tinanoreply@blogger.com