tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post8373222460130868770..comments2023-09-03T04:14:13.410-07:00Comments on Freckled Writer: VibratoErin Davishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-50446528888452978342009-07-13T05:55:39.676-07:002009-07-13T05:55:39.676-07:00There were some good phrases in this..."stacc...There were some good phrases in this..."staccato cravings", "a hummingbird bloated with wanting and worry", "turn your buzzing into vibrato". I enjoyed reading this.<br /><br />-Nicole<br /><br /><a href="http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/07/10/mutiny-in-six-parts/" rel="nofollow">Mutiny in Six Parts</a>Raven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-30211113065638750632009-07-11T18:25:32.541-07:002009-07-11T18:25:32.541-07:00Ohhh, Erin.
You had me at Staccato Cravings....
...Ohhh, Erin. <br /><br />You had me at Staccato Cravings....<br /><br />(JulieJordanScott from ReadWritePoem. I can't, for whatever reason, use my Typepad ID!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-72832552246331426082009-07-11T17:51:29.755-07:002009-07-11T17:51:29.755-07:00delightful....especially the start "swat away...delightful....especially the start "swat away staccato cravings"....we have just come out of the garden swatting moooooooooosquitos...now craving a kewl beerWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-81070659469705563142009-07-11T10:23:11.618-07:002009-07-11T10:23:11.618-07:00Donald-my carefully partitioned brain can indeed b...Donald-my carefully partitioned brain can indeed be selfish. Glad you picked up on that. :0)Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-88333736255239106922009-07-11T10:22:37.209-07:002009-07-11T10:22:37.209-07:00strattonm and Guatami--Thank you. Your kind feedb...strattonm and Guatami--Thank you. Your kind feedback means a lot to me.Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-4358166211617979062009-07-11T10:21:50.073-07:002009-07-11T10:21:50.073-07:00Donald--thank you! My little man/woman inside me ...Donald--thank you! My little man/woman inside me just buzzes. I wrote the poem to express my desire to make her sing or speak clearly. :0)Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-86726412151122349152009-07-11T10:20:39.666-07:002009-07-11T10:20:39.666-07:00ralletanda-Thank you. I really like what you did ...ralletanda-Thank you. I really like what you did with your poem this week!Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-21900962141717078802009-07-11T10:19:38.290-07:002009-07-11T10:19:38.290-07:00Thanks, Angie. I wasn't planning on the hummi...Thanks, Angie. I wasn't planning on the humming bird; he just sort of appeared!Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-46508630558108558152009-07-11T10:18:47.205-07:002009-07-11T10:18:47.205-07:00Kathleen--yes! That's exactly what I was tryi...Kathleen--yes! That's exactly what I was trying to convey here. Scary that you get it?Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-12525315956648504592009-07-11T10:18:06.252-07:002009-07-11T10:18:06.252-07:00ds and Annie--Thank you! I wasn't sure about ...ds and Annie--Thank you! I wasn't sure about this one...Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-69041056374592111212009-07-10T18:28:09.031-07:002009-07-10T18:28:09.031-07:00Wonderful phrases. I liked too many things about t...Wonderful phrases. I liked too many things about this!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/07/abstracting.html" rel="nofollow">abstracting</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-43452418665540818162009-07-10T12:55:17.612-07:002009-07-10T12:55:17.612-07:00erin, "carefully partitioned brain" a fa...erin, "carefully partitioned brain" a favorite line. very personified poem with a strong concept. those ending lines are very selfish, but no worries, so am i. enjoyed -lawrenceLawrence Gladeviewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10074490753640053690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-47197782165948028472009-07-10T11:03:06.415-07:002009-07-10T11:03:06.415-07:00Very well thought out and thought provoking as wel...Very well thought out and thought provoking as well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-65773043968523308092009-07-10T04:32:48.302-07:002009-07-10T04:32:48.302-07:00Maybe all of us have a little man (woman) inside u...Maybe all of us have a little man (woman) inside us that doesn't join in the song since it does not know how to sing. Well done, Erin.Donald Harbourhttp://woodennickel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-25555511884558698542009-07-09T20:54:11.251-07:002009-07-09T20:54:11.251-07:00Musical terminology is always very effective
espe...Musical terminology is always very effective <br />especially words like staccato!rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-7240555840417350932009-07-09T20:34:39.838-07:002009-07-09T20:34:39.838-07:00I like how your homunculus became a humming '...I like how your homunculus became a humming 'bird'of sorts! nice read.angiehttp://therer2doors.wordpress.com/2009/07/03/little-gallows-man/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-54579924033848207382009-07-07T23:36:35.764-07:002009-07-07T23:36:35.764-07:00Tag! Stop by for your royal award!Tag! Stop by for your royal award!Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18372015226222285350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-8921474339906624072009-07-07T20:19:34.010-07:002009-07-07T20:19:34.010-07:00"and turn your buzzing into vibrato" = w..."and turn your buzzing into vibrato" = what I'd like to do with my thoughts sometimes<br /><br />So evocative!Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18372015226222285350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-19128010235229086052009-07-07T19:32:23.845-07:002009-07-07T19:32:23.845-07:00Erin, this is wonderful. You do know how to sing!Erin, this is wonderful. You do know how to sing!dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-68577523039144193572009-07-07T19:29:55.097-07:002009-07-07T19:29:55.097-07:00Erin, this is wonderful. And you do make it sing!Erin, this is wonderful. And you do make it sing!dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-59824073806576190842009-07-07T07:19:45.161-07:002009-07-07T07:19:45.161-07:00Bravo!Bravo!Annie Coehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01980814479525038344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-83789987263279508852009-07-06T12:21:30.115-07:002009-07-06T12:21:30.115-07:00Well, the prompt was a bit abstract, so I just dec...Well, the prompt was a bit abstract, so I just decided to see where it would take me. It asked us to respond to the idea of a "humunculus."Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-47661441238453498042009-07-06T04:14:46.536-07:002009-07-06T04:14:46.536-07:00Hi Erin,
I haven't seen this prompt to know j...Hi Erin,<br /><br />I haven't seen this prompt to know just what the theme is. You are very good at creating these "abstract" thoughts and images. I have posted a poem today. Rather sombre subject but it came to me!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.com