tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post8750788306056450778..comments2023-09-03T04:14:13.410-07:00Comments on Freckled Writer: The VoidErin Davishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-32840276556692064672009-05-19T12:04:00.000-07:002009-05-19T12:04:00.000-07:00I like how you develop the imagery of the body tur...I like how you develop the imagery of the body turning in on itself. It's so simple yet so powerful and really speaks to me. I also wish for that calm, centered place and so rarely find it. And the ending - "all that remains is the unraveling" - perfect!Liz at Yips and Howlshttp://www.blog.elizabethenslin.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-55570576934533403152009-05-18T22:40:00.000-07:002009-05-18T22:40:00.000-07:00hmmmm...I saw a cocoonhmmmm...I saw a cocoonKathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18372015226222285350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-65289040573270855462009-05-17T18:14:00.000-07:002009-05-17T18:14:00.000-07:00nicely written...and i enjoyed the readnicely written...and i enjoyed the readWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-63863842295773008132009-05-17T14:59:00.000-07:002009-05-17T14:59:00.000-07:00You paint a wonderful picture in my mind!You paint a wonderful picture in my mind!Andy Sewinahttp://properjoes.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-18829802533950768632009-05-16T15:27:00.000-07:002009-05-16T15:27:00.000-07:00I like that poem itself and it was a surprise to f...I like that poem itself and it was a surprise to find the hyperlinks going to other poems. The imagery you used to turn in on yourself was wonderful.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/05/16/after-the-rain/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-43039845905847727952009-05-16T08:26:00.000-07:002009-05-16T08:26:00.000-07:00Wonderful; thank you.Wonderful; thank you.dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-41118625270574418922009-05-15T23:54:00.000-07:002009-05-15T23:54:00.000-07:00The imagery is wonderful - "If I could turn in on ...The imagery is wonderful - "If I could turn in on myself..." and the links are such a pleasant surprise! Thanks for this one!Tamrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08016702051457729026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-5400919818832978292009-05-15T18:42:00.000-07:002009-05-15T18:42:00.000-07:00Many a times I have wished for that. TO be complet...Many a times I have wished for that. TO be completely invisible.<br /><br />Yout put all that fear very beautifully.gautami tripathyhttp://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/05/fingers-dance-merrily-in-air.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1967375595996577997.post-3620994004873707952009-05-15T16:22:00.000-07:002009-05-15T16:22:00.000-07:00Very intense, thought provoking poem. I love it, o...Very intense, thought provoking poem. I love it, of course :-).Annie Coehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01980814479525038344noreply@blogger.com