a deserted play pencurious blue eyes blinking above the edge of our bed
a startled separation, an untangling of limbs
a sudden shift in priority
an adorable change of plans
Today's NaPoWriMo prompt 7 asked us to "write and capture humorous incidents related to love in a 5-line love poem called a tanka."
interesting how the things around you can change a moment... now that eye makes it all the more hilarious!!! erotic engine
ReplyDeleteErin, I like this. Shifty.-Irene
ReplyDeleteYes I remember that happening more than once too!
ReplyDeleteErin,
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
I don't remember, which one has blue eyes?
ReplyDeleteSAM I am
And do you realise the psycological damage you might have caused?! :0)
ReplyDeleteHere's what I have to say about this:
ReplyDeleteawwwwww, cute!