I rounded off the
corners only to be left
with nowhere to turn
corners only to be left
with nowhere to turn
Today's NaPoWriMo prompt from readwritepoem was to "get scrappy" and use a piece of an unfinished poem. So, I took this scrap and made a haiku. It's all I've got in me today, apparently, but I kind of like it.
I like it, too. It's clever and it's true. Nice post.
ReplyDeleteClever Erin!
ReplyDeletePamela
I love a good haiku and this one does not disappoint one bit. There is so much power in the short amount of words used here. Incredible.
ReplyDeleteGreat enjambment, clever concept, excellent work!
ReplyDeleteBeen there. Done that. But not expressed so well. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI love it. Simple and effective.
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Very good indeed. The kind of scraps we all need!
ReplyDeleteYou are ever so clever! xoxo
ReplyDeleteThanks, everyone! I was feeling sheepish about resorting to haiku. Glad it came across effectively to all of you.
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