Thursday, June 14, 2012

Common

From Great Expectations, Chapter 9




...she had said that I was common,
and that I knew I was common,
and that I wished I was not
common,
and that the lies had come of it
somehow,
though I didn't know how.

But Joe
took the case altogether out
of the region of
metaphysics,
and by that means,
vanquished it.

If you can't get to be oncommon
by going straight
you'll never
get to do it
through going crooked.

Pause you who read this,
and think
for a moment
of the long chain of iron
or gold,
of thorns
or flowers,
that would never have bound you,
but for the formation of the first
link
on one
memorable
day.

Hello, blogworld!  I've been gone a long time, so I'm not sure if anyone is out there!  I'm trying to get back into the swing of things by using We Write Poem's prompt #109, which asks us to make a poem from another writer's prose. All credit for this, then, must go to Mr. Charles Dickens.  Please note: "oncommon" is not a typo.  It is how the character Joe says "uncommon."

5 comments:

  1. Welcome here Erin. Some of are part from that past as well (including me too).

    Hope you'll also try the new prompt - two voices instead of just one. Will make an interesting experiment.

    neil

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  2. Sweet!
    What a clever use of a kinda sorta found poem! And sweeter still that I get the reference!

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  3. Come back again! I love your poetry and miss you, Erin. :)

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  4. I'm back, Lydia, and trying to get in the swing of things again for NaPoWriMo. :-)

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