This week's readwritepoem prompt asked us to take a trip through the dictionary, using two words as our guides. I selected the words "itch" and "misgiving," and then wrote a poem using those two words and words that occur alphabetically in the dictionary between them.
Resisting the itch
knowing that no new itinerary
could ever scratch it she
led with her jaw
knowing this journey was different
something was off no
even keel here, only
scraped knuckles and bruised
knees and eyes too red to
lament the drowned horizon
or give license to the guilt
tied down in her stomach she
would afford herself no mercy
give no merit to good opinion
honor every misgiving she
had about herself and
just
shove
off.
Woo! Like I said -- you've got a one-two punch! Amazing, Erin. Simply amazing!
ReplyDeleteYou do a great job using the alliteration to propel the reading forward to that wonderful end. Really like it.
ReplyDeleteWow. And wham! Powerful stuff. You have a way with the dictionary ;)
ReplyDeletenice job.....nice photo too
ReplyDeleteAn emotional read, and like how you end it.
ReplyDeleteNice one...
ReplyDeleteerin this was fun to read. enjoyed tracking the progression here until that killer ending. i think the last flight i took out of florida this chick was sitting next to me; papers, coffee, shades, cell phone, and not enough appendages to manage her life. nice write -lawrence
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun game! I must show this to my daughter, the aspiring poetess and wordsmith.
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