Thursday, July 16, 2009

Success


When I meet your emotional acuity,
with my communicative ambiguity
hijinks ensue.

Oh, what marital ingenuity
that our conversational incongruity
doesn’t divide us in two.
This week's readwritepoem prompt gave us a wordle to work with. I chose to use only one word, "acuity" and go from there.

10 comments:

  1. How clever! And well done.

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  2. What a delicious treat this one is. I like the rhyme scheme and the humor.

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  3. Erin, this struck me as clever too. Full of ingenuity!

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  4. I looked at my list from the post and thought (very loudly, I might add) "Was ambiguity on our list?!?!"

    Serve up your brand of hijinks anytime. I'm always hungry for some of that!

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  5. nice.....emotional acuity especially good

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  6. oh, this is brilliant, Erin. (as the Irish would say!)

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  7. And what a lot you did with your one word, Erin! Great fun.

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