Erin Davis lives and writes in Spokane, Washington.
oh I love this, yes it does seem like impossible song doesn't it?
I love the idea of winter ears struggling with the new sounds.
I think you have chosen the perfect form for your subject matter, Erin!
How nice these two haiku stanzas work together. I love "winter ears."
We have forgotten how to listen to the nature's song..moon eats sugar puffs
"...my winter ears stretch..." I love that part.Amazing poem. I love nature references, but can never seem to make them work. I'm jealous!
This is a gem. I love the image of winter ears stretching and yawning. And the rhyme and rhythm flows carries it along elegantly. I remembered kayaking on the Spokane R. as a teen. It was beautiful.
nicely done...i think i had a frog in my poem today also
Nature's song. Love this.
Each of us hears different meanings in the same sounds.
Sigh...
oh I love this, yes it does seem like impossible song doesn't it?
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of winter ears struggling with the new sounds.
ReplyDeleteI think you have chosen the perfect form for your subject matter, Erin!
ReplyDeleteHow nice these two haiku stanzas work together. I love "winter ears."
ReplyDeleteWe have forgotten how to listen to the nature's song..
ReplyDeletemoon eats sugar puffs
"...my winter ears stretch..." I love that part.
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem. I love nature references, but can never seem to make them work. I'm jealous!
This is a gem. I love the image of winter ears stretching and yawning. And the rhyme and rhythm flows carries it along elegantly. I remembered kayaking on the Spokane R. as a teen. It was beautiful.
ReplyDeletenicely done...i think i had a frog in my poem today also
ReplyDeleteNature's song. Love this.
ReplyDeleteEach of us hears different meanings in the same sounds.
ReplyDeleteSigh...
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