She pulled the fork
From the flesh of her
Soft belly
Its prongs had turned dull,
Making it more of a struggle
She pressed her palms
Over the three wounds
To staunch
The flow of her shame,
Stopping it from spilling out
She despaired to think
Of such a messy end—
A stream
Of her guilt, her disrepute
Drowning them all, but
She closed her eyes
And gave each wound
A name:
Depression, addiction, deception.
And removing her hands,
Let the baptism begin.
From the flesh of her
Soft belly
Its prongs had turned dull,
Making it more of a struggle
She pressed her palms
Over the three wounds
To staunch
The flow of her shame,
Stopping it from spilling out
She despaired to think
Of such a messy end—
A stream
Of her guilt, her disrepute
Drowning them all, but
She closed her eyes
And gave each wound
A name:
Depression, addiction, deception.
And removing her hands,
Let the baptism begin.
This is for readwritepoem's third napowrimo prompt: "three in a row"
Wow, such vivid imagery! Today in my poetry-writing class I had my students write about addiction. Would you mind if I shared this poem with them? Love it!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Linda. I wouldn't mind at all if you shared this with your class. Please feel free.
ReplyDeleteThat was amazing. Really powerful and heart-breaking. Nice "prompt-usage." ;)
ReplyDeleteWhat a gift you have, Erin. Have you submitted a chapbook anywhere? I'd sure to have a book of your poetry on my self for inspiration. Glad I can at least read it online. Wish I could take a class from you!!! Poetry has felt so inaccessible to me most of my life. But within the past 4 years, it's become an essential part of my day. Must read some or attempt to write a few lines.
ReplyDeleteAngie-thank you! :0)
ReplyDeleteKathleen-I haven't submitted a chapbook anywhere. I've only done the online thing thus far. I'm glad you think I could--it's something I think about...
Poetry has become an essential part of my day, too. It's hard for me not to write a little each day now.
Submit away, my dear. You've got what it takes. Now take what you've got!
ReplyDeleteThe first three lines are so visual!
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