Wednesday, April 7, 2010

1992

a deserted play pen
curious blue eyes blinking above the edge of our bed
a startled separation, an untangling of limbs
a sudden shift in priority
an adorable change of plans

Today's NaPoWriMo prompt 7 asked us to "write and capture humorous incidents related to love in a 5-line love poem called a tanka."



7 comments:

  1. interesting how the things around you can change a moment... now that eye makes it all the more hilarious!!! erotic engine

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  2. Erin, I like this. Shifty.-Irene

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  3. Yes I remember that happening more than once too!

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  4. I don't remember, which one has blue eyes?

    SAM I am

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  5. And do you realise the psycological damage you might have caused?! :0)

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  6. Here's what I have to say about this:

    awwwwww, cute!

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